Follow This be Crazy like Me.

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Follow This be Crazy like Me.

I walked away hurt and torn, known that my new life was soon to be born.  These day fly by like a crow to corn, there's only one place where I was to form. I made my new life and looked back at the old, only to find a place that was so cold. It froze my fingers to the touch and knew, I wasn't loved that much.  We all looked back to see my life, like a sharp knife that fell from a table and stabbed into the heart of all that may be good.  I have washed myself in the blood of the devil only to find an angel waiting to help me dry.  As for now I'm not complete, Life like to play games on me.  Love has thrown me to the Dogs, and life is like seeing a fresh risen fog. Time has given me plenty of chances, but I feel its like a new freshman dance, I step it steps and together we move, in which direction are we going, Who knows its not smooth.  I lay down my pen and paper for one last time, only to have a flood of words come to my mind.  I guess that is all I have to say, so get a coke and a smile and have a great day.

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hisyanna commented on Follow This be Crazy like Me.

12-08-2010

"I lay down my pen and paper for one last time, only to have a flood of words come to my mind." number 1 line

dahlusion commented on Follow This be Crazy like Me.

06-17-2010

"I have washed myself in the blood of the devil only to find an angel waiting to help me dry"—this is one of the most beautiful lines in poetry that i have read in a long time. This is an honest and real write. Bravo!

Chigger2069

06/17/2010

Thank you, Im glad to have someone with your keen eye feel this way about something that I wrote.

1990lh commented on Follow This be Crazy like Me.

06-17-2010

nice! i completely related to this i felt this way my whole life. i like the that the message of hte poem is kinds serious but the tone is laid back. great flow. awesome ride u took me on

Chigger2069

06/17/2010

Im glad you enjoyed the ride thats my goal when i write. Thank you.

dumdumdj commented on Follow This be Crazy like Me.

06-17-2010

im on the same page as persephone....tough times and this poem fit perfect for me right now....great ride....love the image of a freshman dance

Chigger2069

06/17/2010

Im glad you like the freshman dance aspect because we all start out with two left feet and nervous. Thanks for the Read.

persephone commented on Follow This be Crazy like Me.

06-15-2010

Those words hit me as I'm going through a painful parting of ways presently. I am certifiably crazy...lol. If you visit my profile, you'll find a poem titled " Schizofrenzia"...that say's it all. Admirable outpouring! :) :) :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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