THE WIND IN THE WILLOW

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Love
  • ,
  • Nature

    THE WIND IN THE WILLOW


    Heard the willow whisper softly
    Unto the summer breeze
    Oh won't you stop to talk awhile
    Take a rest beneath my leaves

    But the breeze just kept on blowing
    Through the hills and valleys green
    He could feel his branches reaching
    For a love he'd never seen

    The willow shed a single tear
    As he dropped unto his knees
    His branches brushed the daffodils
    When he called out to the breeze

    Oh summer breeze please tell me
    What I have done to thee
    Why do you always pass on by
    But not a word you say to me

    The summer breeze took notice
    For she had always loved the tree
    So she stilled but for a moment
    Then whispered softly as can be

    Can't you feel me in the evenings
    As I brush up next to thee
    Rustling through your branches
    Caressing all your leaves

    I always thought you understood
    The  special love I have for thee
    But a breeze must keep on blowing
    Or there'd be nothing left of me

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Demosthenes commented on THE WIND IN THE WILLOW

    05-27-2009

    Very tranquil. A calm setting of a person figuring out natures communication, or at least that's what I comprehended from it. It's a very unique poem to me and I think what makes this poem beautiful is the way you made the sentences rhymed.

    boomchild

    05/28/2009

    thank you for taking the time to read this piece, I shall have to go see what you have

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

    Unknown Source

    boomchild’s Poems (7)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Angels Song 1
    Butterfly 1
    Deaths Array 3
    A Shade of Gray 1
    A Victim to ther Flame 1
    Thy Heart Belongs To Me 0
    THE WIND IN THE WILLOW 1