This Need

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    This Need

     This void came rushing over me.
    Like sands in the hours glass, sifting the sea.
    Space and time seperating eternity
    What is it that you need?
    Derailed by lifes arrows, tares and wheat, eye on the sparrow
    Building the bridge so we can meet.
    What is it that you really need?
    Fruits of the spirit anguish of heart making me bleed
    Planting the seed,
    It is you, it is you, That I Need

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    danmartyjake1 commented on This Need

    12-08-2009

    This is sweet and sounds like working out a question out loud. I like this sort of writing and it flows very nicely. Good Write!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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