Walking on clouds

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    Walking on clouds

    Sizzling sunsets reflects the shore.
    Unspoiled fragrances linger like lilac
    Heavens let loose your luminating show.
    Leaving, steaming, breathing, air.
    Divine kisses,costing, my heart to beat,beat,
    Eyes closed,drifting, floating, falling free.
    Captivating clouds, easy breeze, comfort me
    Leaving, steaming, breathing, air
    Seasons rotate like the ride on a wheel.
    The sunsets on scathing seas, impending,
    Trapped in this turbulance and trivial feel.
    What can I say I am in love.
    Leaving,steaming,breathing,air

    Copyright © 2009

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Walking on clouds

    12-08-2009

    THis is a beautiful sensation and you captured it very well. Nicely put. Keep Writing!

    lisagrizzly

    12/09/2009

    Ty you much for taking the time to read my work. I am so grateful for your kind words.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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