Utopia

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    • tear the petals off of you, make you tell the truth // Hole

    Utopia

     A dazzled kiss
    A midnight tip
    Into the night
    I wonder
    Aimlessly, with regret
    Alone, with fear
    But not until I lie

    Utopia

    Cursive peace
    Felt velvet sheets
    Satin aura
    Between them
    Slide
    To me
    I'm shivering
    By your side

    Utopia

    A cold caress
    Sweet, abrupt kiss
    Distorted fabric
    Muffled by the wind
    In the cold night air
    On our balcony
    Wild things
    Still shivering
    I don't need warmth
    I just need you
    You, my

    Utopia

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    Platti commented on Utopia

    05-30-2009

    Very well worded, I love poems that have a metaphoric trace within them, and not to mention on enjoy love/devotion poems a lot, even though my own writing tends to be darker, but very good poem, I like the title too =)
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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