Waves

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Expression through natural wonder.

Waves

Through the horizon the tides still uprising

The shallowness breath each tide makes you feel swept

Tenderness touch felt no mercy by such

No force crept so quick as a tides grasp of hip

The farness such felt as the waves keep you swept

Each push farther back from your reality’s kept

 

Through the horizon the tides still uprising

Travelers come from all places to be

One step closer to that perfect wave underneath

Brings no worrisome force as the wave lays across

Like a blanket just kept for the wave not yet felt

As the break in the wave makes them smile and wave

As they joyfully swim into the depth of their scene

 

Through the horizon the tides still uprising

The soft warmth of air comes across you so bare

With the waves smell of salt and the sands warmth across

Almost as serene as a person may feel

In the pleasantry distance which one keeps from resistance

The jump into water brings much reflection and laughter

No resistance to change, for each resistances the same

As you lay on the sand while each wave passes on

 

 

Through the horizon the tides still uprising

Within a photograph taken, by the water oasis

Can recall just the same by each color through stair

At a picture, a glance at each wave with your stance

Makes you remember, how beautiful weather was treasured

by a picture of waves as they play through your days


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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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