What Now God?

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    What Now God?
    8-14-08--Written by Laura Perez
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    Now what God?


    So where does my life go now?
    The love of my life is forever gone,
    To start over I don't know how.
    I think of him from dusk till dawn!

    I want to hate him but I still love him!
    Please dear God, take this pain away,
    For now my life is just dark and dim!
    And I just can't take any more today!

    I must ask myself, why did I meet Elias?
    We were so happy and so much in love,
    So why does he need to be free from us?
    I once thought we fit just like a glove!

    I have started my life over so many times,
    But when we met I thought that was done.
    It didn't matter if we had nickels and dimes,
    For me it was great for his love I won!

    Please tell me Lord, where do I go from here?
    How do I stop needing and loving him today?
    Can I forget the love of my life I hold so dear?
    If that is your will, give me strength to walk away!






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    samstone1977 commented on What Now God?

    09-27-2009

    I think you have a good poem here and I have totally been where you are. I think you might consider tweaking the line that ends in dove. It seems a bit forced as if the line were put there because of the end rhyme. At any rate, happy writing- Sam
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    goldenone

    11/17/2009

    Thanks Sam! I adjusted it a little so does that sound better?

    mcmaken2011 commented on What Now God?

    08-13-2009

    This is a very well written poem, very nice job and i wish you well.
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    goldenone

    08/14/2009

    Thanks very much!

    Charlie23 commented on What Now God?

    08-12-2009

    When God shuts one door he typically opens another. Blessings.
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    goldenone

    08/14/2009

    Yes I know! God is good! I just don't know that I want any more doors open! But I have my kids and God, and I think that is enough!

    nbosko commented on What Now God?

    08-10-2009

    nicely written..I know what it's like to lose a love.. I am afraid I might be getting a divorce sometime... if you would like you can read some of my poems and let me know what you think...
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    goldenone

    08/14/2009

    Thanks! I really do understand that divorce is very hard! I hope you don't have to experience it! Ask God for help either way to get through all life's troubles!I wish you the best!

    magicmanzz commented on What Now God?

    08-06-2009

    nice job i've been there a few times so i know how u feel please read some of mine and tell me what u think thanks mark
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    goldenone

    08/06/2009

    Thanks! I did read some of your poems! Great writing!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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