What you said you needed...

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    What you said you needed...

    Why did you do that? Smell my hair… You said what you needed was a friend. Now you’re tugging at my underwear!

    Why did you do that? Rub my outer thigh… First you kick me to the curb, and here you are grabbing my breast taking a scrumptious bite.

    OHHH… why am I letting you? Last time I crawled away with a broken heart. Oooo…why does this feel so good? I used to think I had smarts.

    Half naked in the middle of everything, I’m climbing off of this branch. I won’t allow you to do this again. Have sex with someone else! I’m here to be what you told me you needed a friend!

    Otra vez, I’m crying as I leave your home.
    Otra vez, I’m smiling I still think you’re wonderful.

    Why did you leave, when I was touching your face? How did I get back to this miserable place?

    What can I do for you to make us right?
    How many times must you put up this childish fight?

    Love me, want me, loathe me, and then…this continuous path starts over again.

    I know you got issues, but I’m willing to help. I want to if you let me my soul is a pool of loving wealth.

    I choke on the words when we’re together but, I will wait for the longest time if not forever.

    Dame mi la oportunidad para amor.
    Treat me like a woman not some random whore.

    I’m willing to let it go, just tell me how. Still willing to take it slow just help me out.

    Without arguing tell me what is going on? Without making tears gush and pour tell me what is wrong?

    Why are you doing this? Pushing me away….
    How can you touch me and make me want to stay?

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    justme8495 commented on What you said you needed...

    06-15-2009

    bstered women syndrome... I have been there.. I used toright about it too,, but I threw them away.. you are a very talented lady.. Keep it up and one day you have a dream come true ,, just keep trying...

    lovechild417 commented on What you said you needed...

    05-13-2009

    your talent is one to be envied

    Robin commented on What you said you needed...

    03-04-2009

    Very true and informative, This happens to many of us...You did a very good job in getting the reader to feel your emotions in this one, good, very good... I liked it...

    dahlusion commented on What you said you needed...

    02-25-2009

    You have a great talent for spinning tales in poetic form. Love the opening line!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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