whats for dinner

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whats for dinner

as a babe from our mothers womb
we knew nothing,time did loom
this encompumsed all generations.

as we grew was cottled and groomed
the two wolves within grew.

the one young pup to anger and lust
was fed a constant diet of hurt and mistrust.
he was batttered and beaten
by those that he was given
to be loved.

he grew to maturity all battered and bruised
and attitued of hate ;bequiled of his estate.
to know only evil   oh where would it end.

the second young pup to love and a joyous
enviornment
filled each day growing and revelling
in the sunshine of his youth
an attitude of love,respect,and peace.

and so we see the two strains of life  compared
to each other

evil or good
they learn at our feet
what we instill within
and without
will a life time last



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Mareann commented on whats for dinner

11-02-2009

This is a wonderful poem, you did good describing the changes in the everyday life of raising modern day children. I don't like what i see, Children are mostly raising themselves.. It's becomming a sad world... Mareann

angel2

11/02/2009

mareann~thank you the comment angel2

icu2 commented on whats for dinner

11-01-2009

This is a wonderful poem. And so true. When you think about the many children that have to raise themselves, it's a given that they are not being nurtured because Mom and Dad are working........maybe because it takes two checks to equal one, or maybe because they have want, issues..?? Whatever the case, so sad. Wonderful poem!

angel2

11/02/2009

icu2~thank you for the coment . angel2

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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