Wind's Whisper

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    Wind's Whisper

    through
    My ear bitten by
    The cold stings of silence sit
    Deep in melancholy
    My soul pantomimes

    To the awkward emptiness
    Inside and out
    A gust of wind breathes
    The fragrance of a voice
    Carried on a ballerina's pirouettes
    And an ice-faery's triple-lutzes
    Dizzy the message

    Chilled and shimmering
    Down a mountain's spine
    Across an ice-fogged mirror
    Tantalized by over-seeing eyes
    Still bright with curiosity

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    beautifuldeath commented on Wind's Whisper

    05-13-2009

    I love the word usage. excellent flow. brilliant write yet again. 10 from me.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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