Your Presence Lingers

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    Your Presence Lingers

    Your presence lingers as you walk away, bye for now, I will see you
    another day.
    I stand confused feeling somewhat betrayed, I am angry at myself,
    how could I let this happen? 
    Such a high price to be paid.
    Not to hear you laugh, or you watch me giggle, or see you smile,
    You say you need time to heal, I understand but will it take
    a long while?
    I guess the saddest thing of all is your inspiration to me must
    come to an end,
    When all I ever wanted to do was grow and flourish
    and love you as my friend.

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    sherry122 commented on Your Presence Lingers

    03-09-2010

    You’ve put your feelings nicely in a poem…letting go of someone you love is always difficult, my favorite is the last line;)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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