A mind storm pt 1

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    A mind storm pt 1

    A blizzard, tormenting a volcano, is a description of my mind state

    A hurricane of emotions flying at a downward spiral, destination, a blank slate

    My tears hurt my eyes when I cry, so I hold it in

    Why would rain damage the sky, terrible storms again?

    I can’t see why my cloud keeps coming, knowing I’m in a flood as it is

    I can’t breathe, I can’t see, can’t feel, how do I live

    The building blocks of my very existence are crumbling down

    My solid rock in sinking sand is now shaky ground

    Why fight fire with a tank filled with gas

    Bound and destined to burn expending its last, burning fast

    You can’t change that, is what they say you see

    Maybe not, but can I change how it effects me

    Stomach weak, my food is down for the ride

    But does this really represent what I’m feeling inside

    An angry, painful, loving, joyful trip to dying

    A devoted grip on the wheel of life but not driving

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    DeepEclipse commented on A mind storm pt 1

    07-02-2010

    [A devoted grip on the wheel of life but not driving] - That speaks the whole piece to me. Rollercoaster ride of emotional content, angst, joy, doubt, frustration. Every angle played through an uncontrollable ride. [A blizzard, tormenting a volcano] - Indeed!! Fire and ice man. Unexistant harmony. Loved the read.

    FiloRozzell

    08/11/2010

    What a feeling! Thanks...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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    She Can't See ME 4
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    Why I do Write Pt.1 3
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    I've Falllen Short 1
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    I Played The Game 5
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    Pop Corn Love 6
    My Enemy 4
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    Me,Myself & I 3
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