Misunderstood

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    This is my ventalation for my falling tree that makes no sound.

    Misunderstood

    I work to advance my mode of communication, hoping to be understood

    Breaking down and condensing my mix to be clear, a form of mental Braille but results not good

    I blend many levels of conversation with pleasant tones of my soul’s conflict and revelation

    But dead ears cannot hear, which brings total prevention of the mind’s elevation

    I offer mental levitation but an egotistical form of ignorance prevents that rise

    No change in understanding no bright light for their mind or eyes

    I’m misunderstood

    You can’t understand that my walk although similar to yours is mine

    You can’t understand that no matter how straight or crooked I have my own line

    Not a line that is spoken but the line that I walk

    The line that makes it not matter when you speak negative talk

    My mind, soul, love, and possibilities are as vast as the ocean on mental film

    That’s why clarity is unclear as you thread my waters you will drown in my swim

    I’m misunderstood

    By

    FiloRozzell

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    MOMofTWINS commented on Misunderstood

    07-17-2009

    What a wonderfully composed poem. Very beautiful and easy to relate to. I agree with GucciGurl that everyone at some point or another have to walk that line... Awesome piece!
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    GucciGurl commented on Misunderstood

    07-15-2009

    I to think we all have that line to walk. If we are not careful we are misunderstood and it all goes to hell. Keep it up boo. You r kicking back again.
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    frankson03 commented on Misunderstood

    07-15-2009

    man.. yes,, all i can say is yes, i have my own line to walk, not sayin that its not gonna end up in the same destination as you. i just have to go my way.. totally feel that man, i guesss they dont understand our love is diff from theres.. great poem homie..
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    candace12011 commented on Misunderstood

    07-14-2009

    Great! very beautiful, and i completely identify with the words and poem itself.
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Misunderstood

    07-09-2009

    Wow great work agina im more for the darkers of your stuff but still amazig like usual lol :) later man.
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