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    Her

    Damn! Is what I say when I catch myself dazed
    As I wonder if the feeling that I’m feeling has her at all fazed
    At least a little, cause this is not a place to be alone
    Plagued by past disasters that still cut to the bone
    Not basing our futures on our past but experiences have taught
    Anxious to have my rib back it’s time to replace that loss
    But not just any lover-friend can fill that void
    Hearts and lives are too vital to be played with as toys
    Does she even see me with more than her eyes?
    And does she understand that I want more than to party in her thighs
    I gasp for her like oxygen but will she let me breathe
    I long for the taste of her, the thoughts weaken my knees
    My tongue twitches from the urge to speak and taste
    My pride is laying on the ground with hunger on my face
    For her I starve in a love famine hoping she’ll feed the need
    I wear sweaters, I’m not one, but with an exception I’ll plead
    Miss mam, miss lady, miss thang in this wide open sea
    Can you not see the beauty of my forest for these damn trees?
    Must I scream a love song from outside her window throwing rocks
    Just to pursue the revelation of her head on my pillow as my headboard rocks
    Her flame makes me hot to the point I’m engulfed but not wanting to be extinguished
    Her body is a work of art with built in gadgets and I’m her machinist
    Damn, I want her!

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    LemonadeMaker commented on Her

    08-27-2009

    I'm adding this one to my faves. I like it. I hope HER eyes and ears are open to see & hear what you really want and need...lm

    sneakeey1 commented on Her

    04-26-2009

    Nicely done. A very good use of vocabulary and imagination. I am impressed. Keep up the good work!!!

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Her

    04-13-2009

    Great poem.. Even though it sound kind of stalker(ish) lol Im just nessing with yah.. Nice job,.

    flower139 commented on Her

    04-06-2009

    YOU REALLY ARE A GIFTED POET. IT SEEMS LIKE YOU SPEAK FROM YOUR SOUL. LOVE YOUR WORK

    NayInLove commented on Her

    04-03-2009

    This is Hot! I'm glad i inspired you :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    FiloRozzell’s Poems (28)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    A mind storm pt 1 1
    Miss Thang 1
    Breathe 3
    Farewell My Friend 3
    Lord however you give it, I’ll take it 3
    “Lord if I’m still alive?” Then why do I feel so dead inside? 7
    "What Now?" 6
    Misunderstood 6
    The Earth's Rebirth Pt.2 ( Death Becomes You) 1
    No One Heard A Thing 7
    She Can't See ME 4
    The Demon in Me.(a Duet) 4
    Why I do Write Pt.1 3
    Could it be 8
    I've Falllen Short 1
    All for a high 5
    You're not the Pill 4
    YEAH, I'M BLACK 6
    Her 6
    When our world was one 13
    I Played The Game 5
    My mind is saying no but yes is the answer 5
    Ain't Nobody Straight 8
    Pop Corn Love 6
    My Enemy 4
    It's not just the Sex 11
    Me,Myself & I 3
    Who am I? 6