Who am I?

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    Who am I?

    Who am I? Just a man with years of scratches and wrinkles in my hands
    Remolding the pot with clay and tears that mysteriously held my plans
    Feeling reminisces of a star, rolling like a high-powered car
    Speeding out of control threatening to roll destined not to get far from who I am
    “Who am I?”
    Just a man with pride, which was swallowed but not killed
    Anger filled and strong willed “Only to God have I kneeled”
    But even then I looked up which is the only way when you’re down
    In a dark room I sat with only the sounds of large buildings falling down
    To the ground pounding the valley inside my chest
    Taking my breath away as I try to rest for the next test of who I am
    “Who am I?”
    Just a victim of circumstances, one leaf in a whole pot of greens
    The temple of coincidental happenstance echoed by a warriors scream
    Of war and peace, of joy and pain,
    Of love and hate, a soldier’s aim
    Hoping for a victorious conquest just a man who has given a mediocre attempt at his best
    But still blessed to be who I am
    “Who am I?”
    I am the he of the them, the him of the they
    I am the tip of the limb, the reason I pray
    I am the light of day the dark of night
    I am the hopes and dreams of an endless fight
    I am the result of a mistake and part of the plan
    I am a beautiful attempt at the image of God, just a man
    I am who I am and what I am
    Simply because I am yes, I am
    “Who am I?”

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Who am I?

    05-05-2009

    u impress me more everytime i tune into you and read. this was awsome.

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Who am I?

    04-29-2009

    I love the ending Great poem..Oh and sorry if my comments seem short i normally only get 10 minutes on the comuter every hour lol

    fennesse commented on Who am I?

    04-21-2009

    Beautiful way of expressing and sharing your most bold and honest quest for self, yet in the end revealing that you've become fully aware of who you are, a most powerful piece yes

    Glendaly commented on Who am I?

    04-15-2009

    I love this... especially the end... you are very talented

    dangedmanjr commented on Who am I?

    03-25-2009

    wonderful flow...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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