A Simple Drop of Water

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  • Fantasy
    • snowfire
    • is Dreaming Wishing Hoping and Praying for Peace and Light

    A Simple Drop of Water

     Shiny world
    Sparkling bright
    Ponds with Fairy's
    Merry little Sprites
    Frogs sleeping on
    Lily pads
    Fishes dancing below
    Butterflies that glitter
    Fireflies all a glow
    Sunshine always present
    Children squealing as they splash
    in the Pond of pure delight
    Angels standing guard
    Keeping watchful eye
    As colorful Dragons
    Sail across the sky
    Others lay dreaming of days
    long gone by
    As I sit here looking
    In a Simple Drop of Water


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    Zenwitchfaery commented on A Simple Drop of Water

    10-14-2009

    wow I loved the Lightness of this poem and it is very well written I wanted to be there in that drop of water!
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    snowfire

    10/14/2009

    Thank you so much I really appreciate your comments Have a great day

    cliftondurant commented on A Simple Drop of Water

    10-14-2009

    a lovely poem I could imagine al these thing ad I read great job
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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