LIES

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  • Lost Love
    • snowfire
    • is Dreaming Wishing Hoping and Praying for Peace and Light

    LIES

    It seems truth no longer exists.
    I could feel the lies in his kiss.
    Smokey gray our love had become.
    His heart belonged to someone
    That someone wasn't me.

    On the times that he held me
    I could feel minutes start to flee
    Knowing soon he'd be leaving me
    The LIE started to grow
    Taking on a life of it's own
    Leaving me empty and all alone

    That one last last kiss 
    Was all it took
    For the final chapter 
    To be written in our book
    How I longed for one last look
    Our love  ended.

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    kage commented on LIES

    02-08-2010

    good work nice word flow and rhyme, its easy to read and can be understood easily ...... great work i think

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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