The In Between

6 Comments

Tags:
  • Fantasy
    • snowfire
    • is Dreaming Wishing Hoping and Praying for Peace and Light

    The In Between

     In between day and night
    Love and hate tomorrow's life
    A world where Unicorns and Gnomes roam
    Fairies fly and dragons call home
    Angels  meet Demons
    Some feast and some starve
    In the In between that's the way things are.
    Light meets shadow
    Sorrow meets shame
    Something is stolen
    Nobody's to blame
    Time stands still
    Yet it moves on
    As the seconds keep ticking towards the dawn
    Rain turns to rainbows
    Clouds to sunshine claim
    You'll find me in the In between
    In my thoughts in my mind I remain.

    Poem Comments

    (6)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Zenwitchfaery commented on The In Between

    10-13-2009

    wow you are a good writer! Ienjoy your work! sometimes the twixt is a nice place to go!
    Reply to Comment

    SavVySam commented on The In Between

    10-04-2009

    Snowfire- I enjoyed your interesting take on the in between. Write on!
    Reply to Comment

    snowfire

    10/15/2009

    Thank you so much. I do hope you will read some of the others I have written your comments will be very much appreciated

    asylum commented on The In Between

    09-09-2009

    i like this a lot. i once did a lot of work with a theatre company called In Parentheses Theatre Company. it was all about so many lives lived ( here ). It raises a lot of questions, I think, about society, reality, perception. :)
    Reply to Comment

    snowfire

    09/09/2009

    Thank you so much. I'm happy I painted that picture for you

    asylum

    09/09/2009

    ...not to mention the famous..."to die, to sleep, no more..." i really like this. every time i read it i see something else.

    CMarsh commented on The In Between

    09-08-2009

    Very poetic and your words so true...we all are somewhere in between at any given time...Keep writing you have talent!
    Reply to Comment

    snowfire

    09/09/2009

    Thank you so much. I will definitely keep on writing

    cliftondurant commented on The In Between

    09-02-2009

    we are in between all that go on around us and yet we remain who we are
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    snowfire’s Poems (12)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    LIES 1 12/15/2009
    Were You 1 10/14/2009
    A Simple Drop of Water 2 10/13/2009
    Footsteps in the Hall 2 10/13/2009
    Whispering Winds 3 10/12/2009
    Locked 2 10/05/2009
    The Nine 1 09/08/2009
    Tickles 0 09/02/2009
    Time for Bed 3 08/31/2009
    Behind My Eyes 2 08/31/2009
    The In Between 6 08/31/2009
    Snowfire 3 08/10/2009
    Top of Page