A Young Man Feelings

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    A Young Man Feelings

     Lonely, Confused,

    Emotionally abused

    sexually misused

    drinkin my booze

    want to leave but refuse

    can't take it

    mind pacing

    dragon chasing

    crack basing

    life wasting

    wanna cry

    wanna die

    I sigh

    as I lay in my bed

    I dread

    should have fled

    but instead I hit you

    I hurt you

    I just wanted to be your boo

    now I frown

    feeling like a clown

    wanna take back

    my senseless attack

    maturity I lack

    Deserving a smack

    I learned my lesson

    and self control

    thank God for being young

    So I still have time to Grow

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    GucciGurl commented on A Young Man Feelings

    02-12-2010

    Thank God for being young so you can still have time to grow. Great words. You should grow with every experience good and bad at any age. Life goes on. Wanting to be your boo words that can not be forced just have to let happen.
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    Teardrops commented on A Young Man Feelings

    12-04-2009

    Hitting is never ok be it man or woman talk to the one you love and you will find she is still there to listen great poem
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    Tempestlady commented on A Young Man Feelings

    12-01-2009

    Forgiveness is the key to a happy life. As we mature and become more aware of our mistakes, maybe it becomes easier to forgive oneself. Some can and some can't. It sees to make all the difference. Write on.....
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    squadbuddy954

    12/01/2009

    Thanks! for speaking the truth

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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