Feeling

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  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    Just Expressing how I feel

    Feeling

    I'm lying in your bed

    Rubbing your on your thighs

    kissing you on your lips

    looking into your eyes

    emotions and passionate

    thought running thru my mind

    I see you as the one in my life

    maybe we can plan for the future

    and you can be my wife

    you have all the right traits and features

    I can't help but be a gentlemen

    thats the only way I know I can keep you

    don't be afraid to open up and show feelings

    towards me because I will worship the ground

    beneath you

    I am willing to learn, listen, and willing to teach you

    my eyes open and my mind focused

    so there is no hesitation or penetration

    only a demonstration of my motivated heart

    that can't be taken apart unless you take my star

    that will divest my hopes and dreams

    give me nothing to look forward to thats

    when I begin to do bad things but since

    it's just talk and not the real thing

    I'm going to show you mad love

    keep doing my thing S.Q.U.A.D.B.U.D.D.Y

    is my name say it loud and proudly

    I'm your baby and I'm about good things

    MUAH! MUAH! MUAH!

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    GucciGurl commented on Feeling

    02-12-2010

    Hopes and dreams . Keep them alive not matter what or who hurts you. You have so much to look foward to and a past I hope you learned alot from. Keep smiling and be happy.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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