Distance

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I had to post this back up that me and my friend ND on here known as smileyangel138

Distance

ND

I'm looking for something that
might not exist
A man that will love me...
Care for me...
Be there for me
Through the good and the bad...
Can make me laugh...
That I have a little spot
when we sleep
Where his kiss makes me sleep
with peace
That smile when I walk in the room
Who moans when we make Love
The one that makes me weak
The one I can one day call my "Husband"
The one my children will call daddy
I maybe listing things that may not exist
But I won't lose HOPE
For the man will come around
he has to
For my Heart Bleeds for Him


BJ

I see someone that always existed
A woman that will love me
Care for me
Show me the meaning of true love
Makes me smile when I'm down
Gets me excited even in my sleep
Who screams my name
when we make sweet love making
My body tingles down to my feet
The one I can call my "WIFE"
The one that will bless me with children
I maybe over looking this person
But for now on I'm paying close
attention
For she will come to me and
I'm not trying to miss it

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GucciGurl commented on Distance

02-12-2010

sOMETIMES WE DO NOT SEE WHAT IS BEFORE OUR EYES UNTIL IT IS TO LATE.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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