I'm Back

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this for my poetic partner in crime

I'm Back

Message after message

me blowing you kisses

wishing you was here

So I can show you a real man

what your life has been missing

I signed back up for op.com

Because I felt apart of me is missing

my thoughts thru poetry

and that person who always listen

I felt she was straying away

from the lack of attention

I be hush mouth

but I haven't lost my touch

I have to get back on my job

so I can show you that

I still miss you very very much

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GucciGurl commented on I'm Back

02-11-2010

Welcome back . Glad you are writting again. We have all missed your work because you always no what to say.

MsKrystle commented on I'm Back

11-18-2009

Not straying but the space is killing me. I wanna say how I feel but my words go unspoken. Just the thought of you makes me smile, wish I could hold you in my arms for just a little while. I think I can say I found my poetic match, here's a little something for you boo welcome back ---You know I got a response for everything---

squadbuddy954

11/18/2009

this is something I indeed know

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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