I see

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    just expressing what I see with words

    I see

    I see the world as a beauty pageant

    Now days people of all ages are into fashion

    Skinny jeans, short sleeve turtle necks, and pants saging

    Realizing that's not a trend to the world they just Fagots

    on the poetry stuff I will let any body have it

    Polo, Jays' and G-shock wearing is my fashion

    Let's slide to the girls

    man you already laughing

    I can't even open my mouth

    because they think they invite fashion

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    GucciGurl commented on I see

    02-12-2010

    This sounds like you. Always telling it like it is. Keep it real!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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