I see

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    just expressing what I see with words

    I see

    I see the world as a beauty pageant

    Now days people of all ages are into fashion

    Skinny jeans, short sleeve turtle necks, and pants saging

    Realizing that's not a trend to the world they just Fagots

    on the poetry stuff I will let any body have it

    Polo, Jays' and G-shock wearing is my fashion

    Let's slide to the girls

    man you already laughing

    I can't even open my mouth

    because they think they invite fashion

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    GucciGurl commented on I see

    02-12-2010

    This sounds like you. Always telling it like it is. Keep it real!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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