Abandoned

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Abandoned

Desolate
Left all alone
Lonely and on my own

Forgotten
Failed memory
Void, abandoned, empty

Brokenness
Unmovable
and forever miserable

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cheronld commented on Abandoned

12-12-2011

short and sweet write that had a lot to say....nicely done

TREVON commented on Abandoned

12-12-2011

I felt your thoughts of desolation, and isolation good write.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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