Last Glimpse

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    Last Glimpse

     Timeless moments bound by time
    their end begins a new sorrow
    Fading quickly one by one
    Expecting more tomorrow

    A circumstance so unforseen
    holds back therepeating memory
    The expectations strongly grow
    And leave the heart so weary

    A stream of light, a ray bursts forth
    to lessen the burden carried
    When time allows another chance
    for the only hope that tarried.

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    cheronld commented on Last Glimpse

    12-12-2011

    I must admit that after reading Trevon's observation....I had to reread this write and adapt my comments accordingly....and he is so right about the visual description that mirrors nature....you almost see it from seed to growth or season to season....at first I was only going to comment on how I felt a passage of time with a view from the front seat....lol....but his depiction was so much more dead on....nicely done...Cher
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    TREVON commented on Last Glimpse

    12-12-2011

    I like your reference to natures fury in your poems. I to like the rage of a good storm. Continue to write and I will enjoy reading them.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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