Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

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    Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

     Things I do for people
    they do not ask me-
    I share willingly, i'm a fool
    little help I get back, not satisfactory.

    I don't ask anyone for much, as I re-call
    just honesty...sharing adventures-
    friendship; is what I ask out of "All"
    not half truth..no shows..alone I sit , in the future.

    Whatever happened, to a humane human ?
        
              Jan. 27, 2007
                 Chrisjan

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    jj1562 commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

    12-13-2020

    "what ever happened to a humane humane" ouch. Very impactful and poignant. Your poems have a good theme but could do with a bit of meter.
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    amithissecret commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

    07-25-2009

    iI am alot like that so much its like you took the words i wanted to speak and put them on ?paper? but yes the heart is free if we let it be but those who dont understand dont trust i like this poem
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    Aza commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

    07-13-2009

    I am a lot like this poem. We're not fools. People don't appreciate, respect, or understand the heart because it is free
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    Chrisjan

    07/14/2009

    Each word you have written is very true ! Thank you for understanding.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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