Within Us All

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    Within Us All

    Remember the children
    they're within us all-
    Each seeks to win
    also and find bliss-
    When we were children
    advancing in Trust-
    Now that we've grown
    our destiny's in the mist....
    1977
    Chrisjan

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    Aza commented on Within Us All

    07-13-2009

    I love the way you write. Makes me wish I was more.........

    speed11935 commented on Within Us All

    07-04-2009

    Now this is the best on of yours I have read. Just don't let the inner child RULE you.

    NayInLove commented on Within Us All

    02-23-2009

    short and sweet! very nice :)

    Chrisjan

    05/27/2009

    Thank you !Sorry for delay. Wrote a poem to you, hope you like it. Its on my page. Keep that bright smile ! Chris

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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