what is human

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what is human

here you
asking, if i'm human
when both of us
know we are humane !

...what about this
neurotic nuclear ready
world...to zap apart
the races of
planet Earth, in delusion..

where does it all
meet and fit in-
theres a conclusion-
"the mislead want us to
push the button, destroyed,
no one wins ". Lord wins !

now you + i
know it takes love, understanding
and many other rare qualities......
              here we are- - -destine.....

      Chrisjan

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speed11935 commented on what is human

07-04-2009

"now you + i know it takes love, understanding" Oh yes, they is the key

mdpoetgirl commented on what is human

05-30-2009

I would've liked this poem more if there weren't so many typos throughout. The message is strong, but the presentation is a let down.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Chrisjan’s Poems (43)

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Trust 0
Reflections 0
I see, do you ? 1
Later, on Earth Day 0
Who are you ?? 0
City Streets 0
To: Digikuva 0
Peace 1
Ode to Fly 0
Is humanity on the brink ? 1
As God's children (Haiku) 1
Whose to blame on Earth ? 1
I (part 4) 0
Once 1
triangle 0
nowhere today 0
for a moment 1
kiss of darkness 3
Dolores is now, Three 1
Parenting Part 3 2
Floating 2
Dear Jesus ( Haiku) 3
plant love 2
Meant to be 1
Sandy 1
until... 5
dear Lord 2
what is human 2
to; you & I- always 0
Pause in Time 0
aphrodite 1
the light in my day 0
spirit of tyme 0
i- pieces- 0
(I thought) 84's the year 0
reaching in 2
Excert of Lover # 69 0
Thoughts..was it a dream... 4
Am I alone, in a crowd ?! 3
To: Nay In Love 1
We are..........
....???
1
To: Ladybug Captain 0
Within Us All 3