Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

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Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

This is a sick world
when men and women, seduce
mere children, today !

   Chrisjan

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speed11935 commented on Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

06-23-2009

It is a sick world, but don't blame Jesus. In fact He is the only hope for this world

Chrisjan

06/24/2009

It is a prayer to Jesus!From Adam + Eve, we're to blame, we know the Word, but how many listen, ya' know. Thanks for your

wheelsal commented on Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

06-12-2009

Another Haiku poet. H T is an expert so listen closely but remember allow it to be fun. Would love to read more from you soon.

HarverTomsson commented on Dear Jesus ( Haiku)

06-03-2009

Not classical haiku, but an insight after all. lines one and two qualify, line three could be rewritten to comply. The last is the result of the the activity in line two. My suggestion: short eyes left unloved.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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