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ANGELS HOLD THE SOULS OF MEN, IN GRASPS OF MOLTEN STEEL.
THEY GAZE UPON US WITH THIRSTY EYES, AND NO HEARTS TO FILL
IF YOU LOOK INTO YOUR SOUL, AS DEEP AS YOU CAN SEE
THE PICTURE OF THE DARKEN MASS, IS WHERE I WILL BE
I'LL WAIT THEY SAY, TILL ALL TIME HAS PASSED
TO SAVE THE REFRAIN, THAT CONCLUDES THE MASS
THE REGUIEM FOR, THE FALLEN HERD
WILL BEGIN ,WITH ONE WORD
SPEAK THE SLANG, OF FOREFATHERS TOUNGUES
WITH ALL THE LANGUAGES, FORGOTTEN AND FAR FLUNG
AND IF YOU FIND, THE WILL TO SEEK
IT'S NOT THE NATURE, OF THE MEEK
YOU'LL CONSUME THE VINE, AND STILL HAVE THE THIRST
THAT CAN'T BE QUINCHED, AND BECOMES THE CURSE
CRY OUT FOR REASON, HEREWITH UNKNOWN
TILL YOUR SURE ,YOUR ALL ALONE
WITH EYES WIDE SHUT, DARKNESS DOES PREVAIL
YOU'LL WONDER AIMLESS, IN SELF MADE HELL
IF STUBBORN LACK OF DEVOTION,IS YOUR DECREE
YOU'LL LIVE IN THE DARKNESS, FOR ETERNITY.

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Jackie commented on Atheist

06-30-2009

you're Mr. Rhyme poems... that ending is a bit strong, you're saying that he will be in hell for eternity because he's lack of devotion right? Well if he does the goodness or will of God, he follows the 10 Commandments, later in life he will encounter an angel as individual that will tell him the right things to do such as going to church, reading Catholic bible because it is a fact that other religions r only man-made & they do not have the fullness of the truth. I suggestr u read more of my previous poems. To inform u I was in a tragic car accident & I am writing/typing my forthcoming book about my tragic accident & what should know more about God. It is the 3% OF CHANCES TO LIVE OUT OF 10 & I LIVED, currently speaking with u.

dwfuller commented on Atheist

06-18-2009

I like it...it rings of Revelations....................................................................................................................................................!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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Beggars Lament 0
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DARKNESS 0
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Told U! 0
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Nevermore 1
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Strength 0
The Good Heart 0
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Nearly Lost 0
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Free 0
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