Breath

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Devotion
    • ,
  • Happiness
    • ,
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • Love

    Breath

     I wrote this when I married who I thought
    was the love of my life....I guess it just 
    wasn't meant to be. 


    Breath

    How could something so hot
    be so soft?
    Someone so daring
    be so kind?

    How could something so wrong
    feel so right?
    Someone so real
    Feel like a dream?

    What hides behind those eyes?
    Seduction? Addiction? Possession?
    Do you really want me to see?

    Nothing in this world
    will ever quite be the same.
    There is something for us.
    A breath away.


    Tim J. Cullen
    2/12/08

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    dustyrebel70 commented on Breath

    06-15-2009

    That is such a nice poem, to met and marry the love of your life is such a once in a lifetime chance. I thought it was such a nice tribute and well written full of emotion.
    Reply to Comment

    chasingshadows

    06/16/2009

    Thank you!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    chasingshadows’s Poems (19)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    FEVER 1 12/10/2010
    Light 0 12/10/2010
    Sleep? 1 12/07/2010
    Could It Be? 1 09/09/2010
    Withdraw 1 09/07/2010
    Harvest 0 09/07/2010
    Visions 0 09/07/2010
    I 1 09/07/2010
    The Bond 0 09/07/2010
    Phoenix 0 09/07/2010
    Head Blossom 2 06/15/2009
    FOCUS 1 05/19/2009
    THUNDER 0 05/19/2009
    Breath 2 05/19/2009
    LIFE 0 05/19/2009
    the broken 0 05/19/2009
    Whispers 1 05/19/2009
    Tomorrow 0 05/19/2009
    Chasing Shadows 0 05/19/2009
    Top of Page