THUNDER

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THUNDER

Thunder

I ask for the sound
of thunder, and
though I am granted pain,
My prayers for release
remain unanswered.



Tim J. Cullen
8-16-07

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jademelissa74 commented on THUNDER

06-18-2009

I can follow this poem to the end. Taken at face value, I gathered pain, frustration and hope. It leads to many open avenues for discussion. Short, yet sharp as a knife! Great Job! You have managed to reach the reader.

chasingshadows

06/18/2009

Thanks so much!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

chasingshadows’s Poems (19)

Title Comments
Title Comments
FEVER 1
Light 0
Sleep? 1
Could It Be? 1
Withdraw 1
Harvest 0
Visions 0
I 1
The Bond 0
Phoenix 0
Head Blossom 2
FOCUS 1
THUNDER 0
Breath 2
LIFE 0
the broken 0
Whispers 1
Tomorrow 0
Chasing Shadows 0