CLOSE YOUR EYES...

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    CLOSE YOUR EYES...
    Close your eyes and feel my voice 
    the softly whispering with no noise 
    Dancing in the dark
    Kissing with no light
    please...  Just close your eyes.
    Close your eyes and feel my world
    Open your hands and feel my soul
    If I can’t be with you today
    Just close your eyes and think of me
    I’ll be the music that you listen to
    I’ll be there in every song
    Loving your smile 
    I’ll laugh with you
    and comfort you 
    when the days go wrong.
    I’ll be the warm embrace 
    I’ll be the tender touch on your face
    please, just close your eyes 
    We are in our own world
    Yours and mine.
    But now...
    Don’t close your eyes.
    AIXA
    Close your eyes and feel my voice 
    the softly whispering with no noise 
    Dancing in the dark
    Kissing with no light
    please...  Just close your eyes.
    Close your eyes and feel my world
    Open your hands and feel my soul
    If I can’t be with you today
    Just close your eyes and think of me
    I’ll be the music that you listen to
    I’ll be there in every song
    Loving your smile 
    I’ll laugh with you
    and comfort you 
    when the days go wrong.
    I’ll be the warm embrace 
    I’ll be the tender touch on your face
    please, just close your eyes 
    We are in our own world
    Yours and mine.
    But now...
    Don’t close your eyes...
    AIXA

     

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    Tempestlady commented on CLOSE YOUR EYES...

    11-17-2022

    Very nice and romantic piece. Love the intimacy you created. Almost like it reaches out to a lover to get lost in the sensing and feeling of you. Write on.....
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    cheronld commented on CLOSE YOUR EYES...

    06-15-2021

    Simply effortless and beautiful...You spoke a emotion I was feeling and it was unexpected...I look forward to reading more of your work...
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    StandingBear commented on CLOSE YOUR EYES...

    04-20-2021

    Lovely, lovely writing! I wish to one day read everything you've ever written!
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    AIXA

    04/20/2021

    Thank you!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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