TRUE LOVE

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    TRUE LOVE

    True love has never been shown at first sight

    has not been hidden by shame or not even by fear 

    to someone who knows about it
    but never mentioned it.


    I have my name but it doesn't ring the bell

    It's a melody, when I call  your name.

     
    Someone was everything that I saw

    and almost everything that I looked at.


    Was not hatred how I felt,

    but instead I felt fear to show love

    it's because, I am in love

    just afraid to be loved.



    AIXA







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    rollerderby commented on TRUE LOVE

    10-12-2009

    Love can be our greatest gift and our greatest curse, it all depends on which sideof your heart it falls on. I hope yoursis always on the side that brings sunshine into your life. Beautiful poem dear.
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    AIXA

    10/15/2009

    Thanks, you made me smile! Yes, it's definitively on the pure and magic side.

    Grito commented on TRUE LOVE

    09-12-2009

    The nape of your neck, your thoughful pose, when your fingers touch, your grasp of the pen, like the perfect yellow orange color when a mango is just right, to the call of your name, these are reflected when I think of you, as I sit here and of you I write.
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    AIXA

    12/04/2009

    You are my true Love!!!

    laydbak1 commented on TRUE LOVE

    09-11-2009

    Yes, love is a complicated thing... But, loving someone is also the easiest and simplest thing anyone could ever do... You just have to take out the politics, jealousy, power trips, attitudinal over-kill, and threat of infidelity... Hmmm... I think I just defined complicated... lol... Great write...
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    soulwriter commented on TRUE LOVE

    09-06-2009

    This is a simplistic cacophony of the perplexities of true love... in a few words "I Loved your outlook" .... Your avenues for love to exist is well written.
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    AIXA

    09/06/2009

    Can you writte again the comment in my poem, I deleted by mistake, but I placed back. Thanks

    AIXA

    09/06/2009

    Now you can see the version in Spanish called AMANDOTE

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    CLOSE YOUR EYES... 3 04/20/2021
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    A POEM 1 08/05/2010
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    Alphabetical Thoughts 2 01/24/2010
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    THE CURSE 4 12/17/2009
    POETRY WITH YOU 4 12/16/2009
    ONE LAST BREATH... 2 12/12/2009
    PONCE DE LEON 4 12/04/2009
    NENEIS!!! 3 12/04/2009
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    A MOURNING STAR... 2 09/27/2009
    ERES 2 09/09/2009
    AMANDOTE 3 09/06/2009
    TRUE LOVE 4 09/06/2009
    YOUR BODY PARTS 3 09/06/2009
    'ANGELICA" 1 09/01/2009
    THE FUCHSIA ROSE 2 09/01/2009
    THAT NIGHT… 1 09/01/2009
    LOVE SPELL 8 08/10/2009
    PLAY WITH ME 4 08/07/2009
    SAVE ME 2 08/06/2009
    SI DECIDES AMARME 3 06/13/2009
    IF YOU LOVE ME 11 06/06/2009
    TRUE SMILE 5 05/30/2009
    TRUE SMILE END 2 05/30/2009
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    CELESTIAL BOND 12 04/10/2009
    MY OTHER HALF 3 04/09/2009
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    INNOCENT CHILD 18 04/03/2009
    Lost a Loved One 13 03/24/2009
    I asked God for you 14 03/23/2009
    Being inside of you 20 03/21/2009
    Close to you 9 03/17/2009
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    Seeing through your soul 10 03/17/2009
    I will age by YOUR SIDE 19 03/17/2009
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