TRUE SMILE

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    TRUE SMILE

    Shoot for the stars
    and pass the moon
    because, your life is ending soon
    your life won’t last long
    yes it’s a sad song
    so, you got a move on

    before my helpless sight
    I seem to always see you
    with my eyes shut tight at night

    I always see you there
    when my eyes are forced open
    I think that life isn’t fair 
    when I don’t see you that often

    I don’t want to exist
    you are the one that won’t let me pass
    you are a memory unforgotten
    I wish the present was the past

    Where is that glow? Where did it go?

    we were so in love and it would show?

    now it is dim and it shines so low

    without you, my path is to long.

     

    You are the greatest soul I ever met

    I am the luckiest woman on planet earth

    I will spend the rest of my time

    smiling and shining like a brand new dime

    even my love, when you aren’t around

     

     

    AIXA


     

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    wildpendigus commented on TRUE SMILE

    06-17-2009

    I like the pictire as well as the poem it's all nice, maybe this can also be made into a slow passionate love song, I notice that you like to write about real things like your life experiences ! Good Luck grecowong@yahoo.com
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    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    Yes, I am trying to make songs out of my poems.

    soulwriter commented on TRUE SMILE

    06-03-2009

    "I wish the present was the past " - and we are all left at one point of our life feeling this way for someone, something, some journey... good mix of thought and written emotion. Keep creating.
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    AIXA

    06/13/2009

    Nothing like a true smile from the one you trust the most.

    Grito commented on TRUE SMILE

    06-01-2009

    That we all pass through there, and that it seems unfair, is yet part of growth and living and does a cost relay, but if in the act of giving, is what we are receiving, a gift without delay, or a view to find our way?
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    HarverTomsson commented on TRUE SMILE

    06-01-2009

    So you went and fell for that guy. And the melancholy lingers far after the sweet kisses have stopped. Let it feed your next romance with hints of subtlty and loss. The fizz of broken hearts getting healed can't be missed. Let's see- the ironies here: he has freedom to move on, you are stuck. His is a sad short life, yours a long one and with rationalistic exceptions, one of a false smile, and callow bravado. Love that women in your poetry, so complicated and yet so transparent. I feel I've kno
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    AIXA

    06/13/2009

    I am smiling right now.

    WordSlinger commented on TRUE SMILE

    05-30-2009

    Precious, very emotional, the beginning is very touching. Memories and embracing what amazing tools huh.:)
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    AIXA

    05/30/2009

    Thank you for your positive comment. The second part of true smile is called TRUE SMILE END. That will be the rest of the story. Please go back to my poems and read the 2nd part of TRUE SMILE. Ingrid

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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