Being inside of you

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  • Passion

    Being inside of you
    Being surrounded by passion
    where passion kills, passion thrills
    and passion fills

    We lay hand to hand, eye to eye
    the moon staring down
    as if she was in envy
    the light radiating heat upon us
    passion of true stars

    Moving in a song
    a never ending list
    of cords and notes
    written from the soul and heart
    true passion can never die.

    Up or down
    gentle touch
    we slide in sweat
    pure like a white rose

    Reaching the highest
    the wettest
    inside of us,
    my volcano explores

    AIXA

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    Sx9 commented on Being inside of you

    12-05-2010

    well it can be hot,but you make it thrilling and so that is what passion for whatever do,,thanks for the flow and wetness that comes after..
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    tierra7 commented on Being inside of you

    12-25-2009

    Lady AIXA...i love this...it is a pleasant read....to share and experience to the deepest./fullest..or its not sharin' at all...this was filled with sooo much passion...such a sweet spring water fall of Love to soak in...Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ ) i will be back to read more...i notice you have plenty written in Spanish...i might ask a favor of you....... for an interpretation...~smile~ if i used a dictionary im sure it will take the meanin' away...im a novice ~smile~
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    1LostGypsy commented on Being inside of you

    09-26-2009

    Intoxicated and consumed, you leave me wanting more. I appreciate your originality. ~Japheth
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    AIXA

    09/26/2009

    Lol, thanks a lot, I love positive comments!!!

    laydbak1 commented on Being inside of you

    06-13-2009

    This one lays down a foundation for passionate love making and finishes with those burning desires being fully quenched in no uncertain terms... A very good write...
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    AIXA

    06/13/2009

    Thanks, it was made out of warm thoughts.

    laydbak1 commented on Being inside of you

    06-13-2009

    This one lays a foundation of passion down early and finishes the emotional chapter with the burning desires being quenched in no uncertain terms.... Very good write...
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    AIXA

    06/13/2009

    Thanks, it was made out of warming thoughts.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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