Death's Interrogation

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Death's Interrogation

If I were dead
would you wake crying my name
or would you sing in sweet harmony

If I were dead
would tears stain your cheeks
or would your eyes twinkle with glee

If I were dead
would you keep me in your memories
or would you erase all my tracks

If I were dead
would you remember my touch
or would you forget every caress

If I were dead
would you miss me at all
or would you laugh at that thought

If I were dead
would you applaud my death
or would you regret

not loving me enough????

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dannyboy22 commented on Death's Interrogation

10-07-2009

WOW ... that's the best series of questions i believe i have ever seen. very thought provoking!

Crush commented on Death's Interrogation

05-24-2009

Boy, you pull no punches which is what I like about you. You are naked out there with your emotions and fearless with your words. Keep up the good work. I just wish you weren't so sad, honey.

lonewolf commented on Death's Interrogation

04-03-2009

If you were dead, I would grieve, for the world would have lost a most precious flower.

TheAngelOfDeath commented on Death's Interrogation

02-18-2009

i like it... its very good but im not big on the repetetive stuff. and i know my spelling suxs but i have a horrible key board. sometimes the letters wont hit right. lol :D

dahlusion commented on Death's Interrogation

02-11-2009

Beautiful composed like all of your work, but it is disturbing that you allow others this power over you: this power to be so down & hard on yourself. Take this power away from them!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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