Little Girl Lost

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  • Childhood

    Little Girl Lost
    Take a moment if you will
    to find the inspiration
    hiding deep inside
    The little girl lost

    Help her discover her independence
    and watch her take flight
    becoming lost like tears
    fallen in the summer rain

    Take time to hear
    the silent screams
    echoing throughout the darkness
    of that little girl lost

    Take a moment to notice
    that just behind her eyes
    that beautiful smile is fading
    and her heart is breaking

    Remember
    How she wouldn't show her pain
    and wouldn't let you see her cry

    Remember
    How you stole her innocence
    and destroyed her childhood

    Realize that you can never dry
    the tears you forced her to inwardly cry

    Realize that all these things matter not
    for all that she is, you have forgot

    ©2009 (All Rights Reserved)




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    one2run2 commented on Little Girl Lost

    09-27-2009

    It has good cadence and the emoitonal content is solid.
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    Runt commented on Little Girl Lost

    05-14-2009

    This poem is like an anthem of the things I that I lost in my childhood. I aspire to release my pain like this. Thank you.
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    JadedJezzabel commented on Little Girl Lost

    05-12-2009

    one of the best poems i've ever read
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    dubbed commented on Little Girl Lost

    04-03-2009

    There is an inner feeling of suffering being described and released through this poem. It surly describes many situations experienced by children around the world. Great work, thanks for sharing.
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Little Girl Lost

    03-26-2009

    this is one of my favorite poems you have ever wrote this is DEFINATLY going in my favorites i love the last line i could read this poem over and over agin and never get tired of it. (alsom poem) keep up the good work and right more stuff like this i dont get alot of poems that touch me likethis one. (15) i cant give it what it deserves. alsom.. im speechless
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