Dream Visit

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    Dream Visit
    A beautiful angel came to me,
    In the dream I had in the night.
    He was happy and brave,
    And I can't forget his might.

    He looked so very familiar.
    Even though I cared not to believe.
    His eyes burned so bright once he talked,
    This I don't deceive.

    Then once my eyes opened, he was gone.
    Once a dream in my memory
    I suddently realized who he was.
    He was the one and only, grandpa Jerry.

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    keithrberryjr commented on Dream Visit

    01-12-2009

    Very good.Keep it up.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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