Hurting

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    Hurting

    You think I look bad
    You should see the other guy
    Face bloody, can barely see
    Beating 'em up was a piece of pie.
    I hurt 'em so bad that I cried from the joy.
    Feeling so much pride in myself for it.
    I feel so numb
    But I still don't care a bit
    In case, you're wondering
    That person wasn't who you might think.
    I'll tell you the truth
    That person was myself in a mirror.

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    andee commented on Hurting

    01-20-2009

    I liked the twist at the end!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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