To You

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Anger

    To You

    I've made up my mind about you.
    You were not worth my precious time.
    You put me down when I needed help up.
    I can't believe I wanted you as mine.

    I was but another item to you.
    You never really cared for my feelings at all.
    You said all those great things,
    But you laughed at me when I would fall.

    I can't believe I fell into your stupid trap.
    You are still the same as before.
    Always fooling around, never caring.
    You threw my pride to the floor.

    Being with you was great at first.
    But that was only because I fell for your pathetic charming words.
    The beginning was the perfect start.
    I watched the pieces of my heart fly away like a flock of birds.

    I'm glad to be done with you now.
    I don't know if we'll remain friends.
    You've hurt me after you ignored me.
    I knew this "fake" happiness ends.

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    JRata commented on To You

    01-29-2009

    great poem right from the heart and I too have letters to lost love in poetic form. I've fallen a lot.

    LeighPoetic commented on To You

    01-29-2009

    wow...nice poem.

    NayInLove commented on To You

    01-29-2009

    I love it!!

    keithrberryjr commented on To You

    01-28-2009

    Great poem.Many people have had to face the same feelings but it always works out for the best.Keep up the good work.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    Edge’s Poems (94)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    What do I do? 1
    Complications 1
    Four Elimination 0
    It's Time 1
    That 0
    Dream World 0
    Secret 0
    Trap 0
    The Thirst 2
    Cry, Cry, Cry 1
    Meaning Matters 1
    No Matter What It Takes 0
    Unknown 0
    No, You 0
    Get Away 0
    Childhood 0
    Where thoughts will take you 0
    It's Better This Way 0
    Leading to Sick Stomach 0
    No Favorites, Sir 1
    Calm Hostility 0
    Invisible Suffication 1
    Free 0
    Wrestling Lover 0
    Depression 0
    Without You... 0
    Just Do It, Girl 0
    Worthless Life Before Now 1
    Just Remember 0
    I'm Lost 0
    I need you 1
    Stupid Monday 0
    Remembering Forever 1
    My Place 0
    You (babe) 0
    Stupid Bitch 0
    Peaceful 1
    Emotions 3
    Remembering 3
    Slipping Loneliness 2
    Hate Life 1
    Black and Red 1
    Painful Day 0
    Happening Again 0
    Still Invisible 1
    Before 1
    Me 0
    You 1
    Forever 1
    Suffering, No More 0
    Why 0
    It's All Because of You 0
    Don't Worry About Me 1
    Thoughts Write 0
    A Poem 0
    Now 0
    Do You? 2
    What Can I Do? 2
    To You 4
    Terror 0
    The Walls... 1
    Drowning Sorrow 1
    Hurting 1
    Delicate 1
    With Me 1
    Brother 0
    Silly Me 1
    My Angel 1
    Dream Visit 1
    Not The New Me 0
    I'm different 0
    I promised 1
    Words 0
    Memory and Wishes 0
    I can't live without you 1
    All I think about 0
    Missing You 0
    Confusion 0
    Yearning 1
    The Time of Our Lives 0
    Pour 0
    Time -5
    Like Romeo and Juliet 0
    Just hold on...Don't let go 0
    He's Watching Over Me 0
    Abuse 1
    I know, I know 0
    Sad Ending of Life 0
    Story Time 1
    Message To You 0
    I'm Breaking in Two 1
    I Am Emotionally Hurting 1
    Let Go 2
    Missing You (Grandpa) 4