ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

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    This is what I believe we live life for, to find a love so pure and true that nothing else matters but me and you. I hope you enjoy this poem and your comments are always welcome.

    ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

    Eternal Love’s Gift

    Clarence Marsh 9-19-09

    As I gaze into your eyes I see a sparkle

    That will brighten the darkest sky

    When I see your smile…

    It fills my heart with happiness and hope

    You are a gift from God

    He has touched you with the gift of love

    When you enter a room

    Your presence inspires those around you

    When you speak… your words echo for all to hear

    When you walk… you display a confidence others desire

    When you Love… you do it unconditionally

    When we are together there can be no more

    Perfect union now that two hearts have become one

    We will symbolize what true love can be

    For only then will we receive

    A gift sent from the heavens

    Delivered upon the wings of angels

    They have given us the gift of eternal love

    So rare and cherished

     It’s only bestowed upon a blessed few

    Which happens to be

    Me and You!

     

     

     

     

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    Qualin commented on ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

    05-25-2011

    SO VERY TRUE AND TOUCHING I FEEL THE WORDS CAME FROM YOUR HEART THE MAKING OF A GREAT POEM AND WRITER..FIRST READ "I'LL BE BACK!!!! QUAKIN THANKS
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    Sugz1 commented on ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

    12-10-2009

    Great poem! It reminds me of some-one I know all to well
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    Saylar commented on ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

    10-16-2009

    This is my absolute favorite Sweetie, thank you for opening your heart to me and sharing this personal part of you.
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    CMarsh

    10/16/2009

    Thank You! I'm happy that my poetry made you happy.I will my best to continue writing poetry that is moving.

    snowfire commented on ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

    10-13-2009

    CMarsh I love this poem Such an in depth look at Love I really enjoyed it very much.
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    ladyinblack1972 commented on ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT

    10-08-2009

    This is real good I like it. It's something that everyone wants in some cases can't have.
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    CMarsh

    10/14/2009

    Thank you for your comments, but I must respectfully disagree with you. Love can be found if you truly want it,Without this believe what would we have to look forward too.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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