LOST LOVE

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    My one and only Sweetheart from Jr high till Senior Prom night.

    LOST LOVE

    LOST LOVE

    By,

    Clarence Marsh

    Once in my life I had a love greater than

    Anyone could imagine

    We spent many years together

    Then one dark and gloomy evening,

     We attended a special event

    Little did I know my world of love and happiness

    Would be filled with pain and sorrow.

    To my dismay I was told… it was not your fault,

    It was her family…who had chosen her future

    She obeyed and I lost my future.

    I was left wandering that night

    What do I do now?

    Because not only was it our Prom night

    It was my Birthday too!

    Sometimes I wonder what if…

    Because in the word gift …you have “IF”

    I received a gift that night… I will never forget

    It left my heart in pieces

    My soul in despair

    When she left me…

    Who else would care?

     

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    knight4696 commented on LOST LOVE

    09-18-2009

    This is a very heartfelt and deeply sad poem. I can feel the emotional depth and feel like you have opened your soul to all. Thank you for sharing.
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    knight4696

    09/18/2009

    Anytime. I enjoy your writings.

    CMarsh

    09/18/2009

    It was a difficult one to write...thanks for your kind words.

    teasasue commented on LOST LOVE

    09-14-2009

    aww that is so sad cmarch, well written keep writting
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    CMarsh

    09/14/2009

    Thanks Teasasue! She set the bar that others failed to reach.

    Saylar

    10/18/2009

    I feel bad for anyone trying to raise above THAT bar!

    CMarsh

    10/18/2009

    Saylar you have re set the bar and now the rest is up to us.

    Sugz1 commented on LOST LOVE

    09-07-2009

    This Is a really sad poem alot or hurt and pain but very nice and once again thanx for the comments
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    CMarsh

    09/07/2009

    Thanks Sugz! I write what I have experienced and what I dream for the future.

    KristyLoren commented on LOST LOVE

    08-29-2009

    Alot of feelings here, sadness the main one. Being alone sucks, but I would rather be alone than with the wrong person. I enjoyed reading your work, it has great lyrics and passion. Good write.
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    CMarsh

    08/29/2009

    Thanks Kristy and I agree about being alone...but its always better to share love then keep it inside.

    sandyb commented on LOST LOVE

    08-27-2009

    I too share those thoughts of "what if". This story is so true for many people. I actually have a really close friend who had her parents arrange her marriage, all the while she was in love with someone else. Her heart pains to this day for the love she had to give away as yours does. Such sadness to have heartbreak on what is supposed to be a special day x's 2. Very nice poem, makes me miss my friend.
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    CMarsh

    08/28/2009

    I know the feeling all to well and my high school sweetheart only lives about 6 blocks from and is married but not happily.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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