Hot Love

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    • CMarsh
    • Feeling much better now that I have found my purpose.

    Hot Love

    Hot Love

     

    Our love is like a volcano

    Its builds from deep with our souls

    And over time it continues to grow

     As it grows the internal temperature continues to rise

    Once it reaches the point of no return

    It will burst with a love

    That is only seen once in a thousand years

     Our love however will not destroy all it touches

    Our love will inspire those close to us

    And teach others that true love is worth the wait.

     As our love flows down the valley and touches every living thing

    It we bring a new beginning to all it touches

     For a love like ours carries

    A special ingredient that can only be seen

    When two people are willing to share everything

    They have without any conditions and complete trust.

     True love isn't something you find

    It’s something that you are blessed to find.

     From that moment you realize

    The person standing next to you

    Is a blessing from God

    And with a blessing so special there can only be one result!

     EVER LASTING LOVE!

     

     

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    Saylar commented on Hot Love

    10-18-2009

    Yes, true love IS worth the wait. In order to achieve true love, yes... two people willing to share everything makes the journey effortless and rewarding. I agree and can relate WELL to this piece. Thank you again for you.

    CMarsh

    10/25/2009

    I'm happy that you feel this way about my poems,they now have new inspiration. You are the lay of my dreams and I love you.

    knight4696 commented on Hot Love

    09-09-2009

    I liked this one, but I did find it hard to find the flow, Ironic isn't it? since the first line is "Our love is like a volcano " :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    CMarsh’s Poems (19)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Do You Believe? 12
    Crossroads 11
    ETERNAL LOVE'S GIFT 33
    Tears of Sorrow 2
    Michael Jackson Tribute 12
    Savage Garden Dedication 13
    First Passionate Kiss 7
    Even though we have never met 6
    FAMILY 6
    LOST LOVE 8
    CHOICES 5
    Hidden Truths 16
    TRUTH 4
    COMMITMENT 3
    Hot Love 2
    HOPE 3
    The Key To My Heart 5
    Unspoken Love 5
    ABSENCE 7