freeze
when blood runs coldand faces freeze
my heart stops beating
i fall to my knees
everything stops
and i cant breath
things are lost
never to be seen
freeze
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Tags: Dark Poetry
and faces freeze
my heart stops beating
i fall to my knees
everything stops
and i cant breath
things are lost
never to be seen
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11-28-2009
- Short but very chilly and creepy it makes me think of freezing to death or falling through the ice and then meeting a cold frozen end. Nice work.
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