senses
ugly names, ugly facesloud voices without replaces
colors of unknown origins
smells of those around me
confusion about them
where do i fit in
oh well feeling better
on the outside
senses
4 Comments
loud voices without replaces
colors of unknown origins
smells of those around me
confusion about them
where do i fit in
oh well feeling better
on the outside
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11-28-2009
- short but to the point. you could have expanded a little bit more, but over all this was nicely said
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11-25-2009
- names and making faces at you only, can harm you if you react to it. you know who you are on the inside
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11-24-2009
- Nicely writen...we all fit in here hehe...............................inkmaster
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redbloodink commented on senses
11-24-2009
- simply great,..... Fitting in..... Well Lost no-need to even wonder about that... we all fit...
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