what is wrong with me?

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this is me and all i will ever be!

what is wrong with me?

I cut to bleed
I cut to feel
I cut to know that all my fears are real
it doesnt hurt
is quiet refreashing
but it becomes an addiction
and i dont want to stop
with it i feel normal
like all the rest
the more I bleed
the better I feel
what is wrong with me?
is any of this real?

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lonewolf commented on what is wrong with me?

01-24-2010

your pain is felt by many. life isnt kind to the lonely, but if you seek out those willing to listen, comfort can be found.

Maleficent commented on what is wrong with me?

01-22-2010

I love the emotion poured into this write... I know this feeling, too... it's far better to write it out... thanks for sharing and write on

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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