time

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  • Lost Love

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    today is the 15th of december and i hurt

    time

    you wanted time and i gave it to you
    then needed space, you got that too
    now i am so confused
    you hold me and kiss me yet we are friends
    thats all you want to be?
    well you cant have only half of me
    there is none or all no in between
    so its none you have chosen and for that i cry
    there is so much pain as i say good bye
    maybe its better being this way
    but it really doesnt feel like it today

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    inkmaster commented on time

    01-22-2010

    Deep lostsoul...I feel your pain in this one.....Inkmaster

    MarionYost commented on time

    12-28-2009

    This is Awesome.. Great job. I can relate, Yu should read My "Friend" And "Prove me Wrong"...... Nice write! All the best -Marion-

    Teardrops commented on time

    12-15-2009

    when love goes bad time is the only healing we have . beautiful poem

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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