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  • Lost Love

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    well forever never comes for people like me and the love never come either

    waiting

    my heart beats as i cry
    waiting for you i want to die
    but i will never do it because
    i know the chance is slim
    that i may see you agien
    i dream at night that nothing went wrong
    and your right here where you belong
    they said you were bad and would hurt me
    but in the end i hurt us both
    i have a way of makeing every one
    wish they had never bothered
    but i hope you over look it
    and are ready to love forever

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    lostsoul17’s Poems (13)

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    time 3
    blame 1
    more then 1
    waiting 0
    three days 0
    sleepless 0
    no choice 0
    MY GIRL! 0
    what is wrong with me? 2
    freeze 1
    insist 1
    school 1
    senses 4