three days

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  • Lost Love

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    well this one comes with an interesting story that im not in the mood to tell but lets just say the promise was broke and it did not end well!

    three days

    you hurt me while you wee here
    but i hurt more that your gone
    i wish those three days had never ended
    at the time they seemed so long
    but its over now and i must move on
    but i refuse to love another while you are gone
    when you will come back i really dont know
    but i hope you keep your promis
    i'll always have the ring to show
    at one point you saud you loved me and promised forever
    its some thing i will never let go

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